Monday, November 23, 2009

Five sentences

Sadly enough the Dirty Pretty Things disbanded.


Annoyingly it creaked every time I moved, I despise my chair it is noisy and uncomfortable.


Marlow was in my thoughts, he will not remain there for long.


Even though the boat was damaged, it continued down the river nonetheless.

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Passage re-write page 33 Heart of Darkness

In a few days the Candy Crusaders went into the patient candy land, that closed upon it as the kool aid sea closes over a fizzler. Long afterwards the news came that all the gummy bears were dead. I know nothing as to the faith of the less valuable gummy animals. They no doubt, like the rest of us, found what they deserved. I did not inquire. I was then rather excited at the prospect of meeting the leader of the lollipop guild very soon. When I say very soon I mean it cooperatively. It was just two months from the day we left the syrup creek when we came to the pop rock bank below the lollipop guild leader's jelly bean castle.